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False God
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:21:42 AM in AEST
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Closed mind
Open only on Sunday
Accepting only those of faith
Take your failing God and let me be
Destruction and Death a follower of your path
Damnation based on love
I have no fear of your lords wrath
It has not the power to corrupt this human mind
All that I am can feel your hate
Yet you fail to understand
You pray to your God but it's too late
To shed such light as a numb mind can take
Closed mind seeding this dead soul
Redirect your faith
If only your heart you gave control
To see there is no false creator, there is only truth
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Re: False God
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by Black13 on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:26:44 AM AEST
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Good write.
Pretty nice flow.
Better hope you are right.
Never good to mock anothers faith though. :) |
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Re: False God
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by Cancer on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:27:49 PM AEST
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damn good message. i couldn't have said it better myself. truth in it's most pleasing form.
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Re: False God
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by MissMandy on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:09:12 AM AEST
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| Tubby that makes me cry! :( |
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