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sad at 4pm
Contributed by
btiganov
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 04:17:08 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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his baldpatched hair greased back
his height reduced by age
his sanity reduced by insanity
staring at sweaty workers
drilling the sad street
drilling so much
there’s a hole from one end
to the other end (in my head)
his eyesight limited to distortions
he can’t move one inch more
“what are you looking at?”
that mouth won’t move
that voice won’t work
it’s a hot day
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btiganov
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2004-05-15 04:17:08]
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Re: sad at 4pm
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:42:56 PM AEST
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Re: sad at 4pm
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by apollo on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:40:34 AM AEST
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i must say this did bring feelings of lunacy. just the thought of all these crazy occurances would drive one mad. it sure is a hot day, that is certain. great write!
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