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this peace will end this peace will finish
Contributed by
btiganov
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 04:19:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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this peace will end
this peace will finish
this hand holding this cigarette
these eyes looking to the other side
these eyes looking
this woman walks past
this woman dyed blonde wannabe
this woman waves her hand
this woman thinks I’m polluting her
this peace will end
this peace will finish
this cigarette I do not enjoy
this woman I cannot stomach
this platform with trains crashing
drowning
at least I’m taking another nobody
with me
this woman reading C.S. Lewis
the Lion
munching on her brains
these great readers
bumping into posts
these eyes closed and tired
this peace will end
this peace will finish
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btiganov
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2004-05-15 04:19:02]
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Re: this peace will end this peace will finish
(User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:26:43 AM AEST
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i must say, this piece is quite clever. i really like the idea of how you thought you liked something, only to find out it wasn't what you expected. great piece.
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