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the hidden me
Contributed by
moon_light
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:48:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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with my mask,
i hide at last.
my true self bound,
the true me never to be found.
you ask why im this way.
you ask me what i have to say.
when the answers i don't care.
you think nothing's there.
i hide for safety,
hid for comfort.
i am me.
unfortunately you'll never see.
when im sad you'll never know,
because my feelings i don't show.
your life's hard enff,
no need to worry about me.
that's why you'll never see.
i'm no longer young.
my wings are sprung.
i'm not the little girl you think i am.
im not what you see,
my mask hides me.
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Re: the hidden me
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:51:05 PM AEST
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sad poem to me.
take the mask off let me see
I bet from the heart that you share
I bet anything YOUR BEAUTIFUL UNDER THERE.... good write sandy |
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Re: the hidden me
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:06:25 PM AEST
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| Good write. I think at one time or another we all wish we could hide from the world. |
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Re: the hidden me
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by thumper on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:47:58 AM AEST
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I know you hide but I also know that there is a very Beautiful person under that mask! I'll be asking you what grade you got. I really liked this. We all have a mask of one kind or another. But you really need to let your REAL self shine through more often. ((((((Jen))))))
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Re: the hidden me
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:58:31 PM AEST
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i'm glad you wrote this and you are beautiful underneath. throw the mask away already.
your friend,
Lina |
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Re: the hidden me
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:54:32 PM AEST
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hey jen, thats a really good one but u really shouldnt hide behind a mask. Im the one who hides behind a mask around here, well ill put some more of my poems up when i get the chance ok ttyl bye
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Re: the hidden me
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:12:32 AM AEST
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| This poemis alot like one of my friends poems "Reflecting Pool" by Grey_Matters.....check it out, i think you'll like it |
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