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Oblivious
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:55:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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"Oblivious"
Whenever your around
You make it for me safe and sound
We would laugh and cry
Say wed be together till we died
With you I act myself
Youre the one who knows what Im really about
I think Im in love, and thats without a doubt
Im the one you cant live without
Im the one who is always by you
Im even the one star struck when I see you
You were perfect so I thought
I saw your flaws
Bur never fought
Oblivious is how you make me feel
So unlikely not even real
I feel Im in a fantasy land
You and me hand in hand
When I speak you tell me that Im cute
I wanna throw my arms around you
I undergo a heartbroken moment
As soon as I see Im without
Oblivious is how you made me feel
So unlikely not even real
I feel my fantasy land disappear
Then my fear starts to appear
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Re: Oblivious
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by Another_Dimension on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:02:14 AM AEST
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| I can empathize with you very much you know, ever want to talk. message me x |
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Re: Oblivious
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:10:42 PM AEST
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| I was never involved in poetry much until I started posting things here. I read things from time to time, but mostly stick with fantasy-type poems. I sympathize with what ever happend between you and who your writing this about. Im going to say what I said to Erin (the one I was talking to when I wrote sleeps and sheeps). At one point please try to write something light, stop thinking about heavy moments for a little while and write something happy. I hope this doesn't sound insensitive, but things dont always have to be dark...ive noticed alot of people here write some depressing things related to love troubles...and if writing helps ease the pain then write dark if you must...but perhaps if you write something light you will in turn feel light as well. As for the poem...unfortunatly I am not a critic....I thought it was well written and I like how you called your happy times fantasy land. |
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