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Lost In My Own Shadows
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:05:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cast into the shadows
By hearts made of stone
Lost in the darkness
Wondering why I'm alone
I scream out in pain
But no one can hear
Faceless souls pass me by
Running from unknown fears
I can't seem to remember
I do not know who I could be
And I am blind to a light
A light that can set me free
Cast into the shadows
By hearts made of stone
Lost forever in this dim darkness
I wander in the shadows alone
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UnfallenTears
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2004-05-15 20:05:16]
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by morelikelyrics on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:11:11 PM AEST
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Such complex emotions, yet all sumed up with simple words... beautifully touching...
I am somewhat speechless on this, all I can say is i love it, and I feel exactly what you are trying to say...
Please continue your wonderful writes!!
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by Marcus493 on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:29:22 PM AEST
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| I'm sure to a point everyone feels this way about everyday life. That's just my interpretation of it. Well Written though! |
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:39:43 PM AEST
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excellent write, but remember for every dark shadow there is someone who holds the light to brighten it forever.
smile
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:07:49 PM AEST
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| I'm sure everyone feels like this at some point. You placed the emotion so well into words. Very nice. |
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:56:14 AM AEST
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Great write. I love it.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by Delusions on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:56:27 AM AEST
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| awsome poem! keep em coming ~delusions~ |
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:12:11 PM AEST
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| You drew me in with the title and kept me straight through. Incredibly well done! |
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Re: Lost In My Own Shadows
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:30:05 PM AEST
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This poem is like all the others I've read. Welcome to YPDC by the way......I'm sorry I've missed your lovely poems......you'll really like it here. We're like one big family....if you ever need any help just call on me.
Would be so happy to help you in anyway I can!
Welcome again.
ConSue
:Lovingcritters
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