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Death of an innocent
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hidden in the bushes lies her youth
Bounded by the ankles
And cuffed by the wrists
A pale face
Turning slightly blue
A gash on the cheek
A slap on the face
A swollen naked body
Penetrated and beat
Her innocence was lost
Her fragile body is left to decay
Without her knowledgeable soul
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2004-05-15 21:08:45]
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Re: Death of an innocent
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by thumper on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:48:51 PM AEST
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Well, not exactly a popular subject, but since I live in Detroit, it's not uncommon. I like the way you painted the mental picture of what has happened so many times. Well put.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Death of an innocent
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by RebelRose on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:49:03 AM AEST
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| i LIKE THE POEM BUT TOO ME IT IS SCARY. tHE POEM MAKES YOU FEEL LIKE YOUARE THERE. i LOVE THAT WHEN POEMS DO THAT. |
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Re: Death of an innocent
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by Delusions on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:52:35 AM AEST
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| a chilling write... a very sad subject but written perfectly... keep em coming ~delusions~ |
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Re: Death of an innocent
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by arden on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:03:29 PM AEST
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the imagery was really really good. very dark and chilling. this was a awesome write.
very well done.
i liked this one.
Arden |
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