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Gilded Age
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:33:12 PM in AEST
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Gilded was the word Made me laugh Howl with censure How apropos Indignant moniker Lifes full of surprises But never the lottery Riske and rotten Numbering askew Tied one on And then another Stacked up Chronological order Debatable Quantity versus quality Reclining or declining years Never quite clear Have another One more for the road Depleted Conversation Stalled in low gear What about the weather Yes its raining again Taxi? Yes, thank you
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:04:17 PM AEST (User
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I like this style quite witty I must say
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:39:28 AM AEST (User
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A really new way to present a poem I like the shortness of the lines it makes good reading too.
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:53:03 AM AEST (User
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lol, gaille its 3am now and as i was logging off i saw this, clever, wonderful and delightful as always and sooooooo cute lmao! hugs n' loves ya, nessa
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:38:25 PM AEST (User
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I Like The Style In This Wonderful Write
You Have Written This One Really Well !!!!!
Keep Em Coming :-)
********LoVe**AnGeL**********
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:50:39 AM AEST (User
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A little different for you, but I can still relate. The feeling is all too real.
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