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God is great.........
Contributed by
ravisada
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:52:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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God has given us a healthy body
and he has filled with golden soul in it
God has given us the beautiful Love
and he has shown us the meaning of the love
God has created a man and a woman
and he has taught us the value of family
God has given us beautiful children
and he has given us the guidance to teach them
God has given us the beautiful nature to live
and he has given us the beautiful animals
and brids to care them
God has given us the faith to live strong
and he has shown the way to help others
God has given this beautiful universe to us
Let us thank God for all his creations and
promise him that we live the way he want
us to live.
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright 2004 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2004-05-16 01:52:10]
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Re: God is great.........
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:31:54 AM AEST
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umm i don't have a religion..and i don't believe in any GOD...i gave up cuz my prayers were never answered....
but i know for some people this will mean a lot to them...
i think this poem itself is very sweet and the message is portrayed is quite clear..
i ilked this one...
especially the flow and the way that the tension/suspense slowly builds up and at the end reveals the message.
Beautiful, powerful write...
katie |
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