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Screaming
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:47:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My body cries out to me
It, even more than I, knows
Time is running out
Its shouting in the silence
Making me want to listen,
To peel back the layers
Everything else is moot
For a moment, and in that
Moment - I am lost
I am a victim of myself,
Dazed with a solitary thought
Of a necessary endeavor
Stationary, yet moved by
This feeling that is larger
Than I could have imagined
I am without the ability
To argue an alternative,
Accepting what it tells me
Knowing it is essential, but
Doubting whether anyone else
Will see it that way
I do so want to listen
To act as it tells me I should, to
Simply do as I have done before
At the same time, knowing
That this time will be different,
The sun has made it so
My body cries out to me
It, even more than I, knows
That time is running out
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Re: Screaming
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by Cancer on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:15:51 PM AEST
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very nice. i enjoy writes like these that have that ambiguous nature. since it was left open to interpretation, i'll share mine. in short, i felt it was about cutting. and in that context, it hits the nail on the head. again, very enjoyable and descriptie while still remaining topically neutral.
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Re: Screaming
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:11:28 PM AEST
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| sometimes there is a un-pleasant but effective way to solve every problem.... I feel this way often. great write A++++ |
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Re: Screaming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 02:23:26 PM AEST
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| gosh a lot of ideas come to mind....babies, old age or even sun burn lol |
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Re: Screaming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:46:37 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. I like how you've left it open for each individual mind. Very creative and written to perfection.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Screaming
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 04:41:24 PM AEST
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Yes ... yes ... and yes. This time ... It will be different. Somethings the body just ... knows.
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Re: Screaming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:31:49 AM AEST
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You're right, Snem...."how you interpret this one probably depends on your state of mind". Maybe not necessarily an interpretation but it did provoke a thought in me.....about my sister.
Nonetheless, a very brilliant poem.
Thank you.
Tim
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Re: Screaming
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:23:51 AM AEST
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Introspective and brilliant. I too feel the sun's charriot tear across the sky at an ever increasing speed. I feel time running out. I particularly love the stanza:
"Stationary, yet moved by
This feeling that is larger
Than I could have imagined."
Reading this poem makes me feel a sense of urgency to get my things in order. Beautiful write Snemmy!
Butch
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