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Forgiveness
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:26:34 PM in AEST
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I came to you asking for forgiveness you said:
DONE
I went out and hurt you again
I came and asked forgiveness
Again I hurt you but you forgive me
I hurt you
You forgive me
How long will this go on?
Forever?
Why?
I dont deserve it
Please forgive me anyway
February 04, 1999
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Re: Forgiveness
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by SugimotoYouki on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:47:29 PM AEST
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nice work...
a devil's circle, which you seem to desperately want ot break through...
good luck with this... |
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Re: Forgiveness
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:55:36 PM AEST
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| very good write.. |
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Re: Forgiveness
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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| everything does has a price, but its never too high. deserving something is perspective. good poem. |
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