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White Innocence
Contributed by
SugimotoYouki
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:45:16 PM in AEST
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You cast these chocolate eyes on me offering me everything you can bear, with a sweet smile but what you lay in my hands is to precious to be broken
Innocent angel eyes looking into my hollow ones soft skin shivering under my abusive touch my bleeding heart staining your soul of snow white innocence
Can't get myself to break away don't you notice that I'm just stealing the tender warmth of your body to keep warm that cold as ice body of mine
memorizing, pretty face with an angelic smile but if I see throuh the mirror of my heart I see a scar tracing, freshly carved like what my own face does reflect
I don't want to hurt you over again tear that lovely, little heart appart dye this innocent white red as the blood on my hands black like a feather of my raven wings
I just want to hold you close never miss you again sweet, innocent angel protecting you shall be my mission
beauty I used to cruelly destroy but now I see, beauty's there to be treasured love, admiration, desire, dream, let us share all that fall, hurt, cold, longing, loneliness, let's leave behind
let's close up from the rest of the world beeing free forever let's never part again dreaming forever
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SugimotoYouki
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Re: White Innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:53:26 PM AEST (User
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this is such a powerful and emotional poem, with everything in the right place which just makes it
Wow
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Re: White Innocence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:47:21 AM AEST (User
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This is truly a great write! You are really capable of touching people's hearts with your well-placed words...
Greetz,
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