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I Bleed To Feel
Contributed by
savingmarion
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:28:37 PM in AEST
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Cut me until I bleed in time with the music.
Cut me until the blood flows as clean as Your love.
Break me until the tears flow as clean as the blood.
And hold me until the love flows as clean as the tears.
You've cast me into this darkness.
Pull me out before my eyes grow accustomed.
I need You to reach down and,
Fill the empty half of my slowly breaking heart.
My eyes are still wet with mourning.
So let's make this our finest hour.
Tear down the walls that guard my heart.
Burn the membranes within which I once was safe.
I surrender to You everything I hold dear,
And pray that I can gain it back.
Copyright ©
savingmarion
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2004-05-16 15:28:37]
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Re: I Bleed To Feel
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by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 07:19:13 PM AEST
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this is very good. sumwhat unique to. not very many people post poetry that doesn't rhyme. i like i a lot.
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