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The Sun Still Shines
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:48:36 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Despite the thunder and the rain and all the crying growning pain
Even though faces don't smile and we havn't had any peace in a while
It is grim and it is grey and often times we need to pray
But beyond all the dark, life can still be a nice walk in the park
For there is light and there is day
And there are plenty of delightful things to make us stay
For look at nature and its awe
And there are plenty much more we havn't yet saw
Just think of all the flowers in spring, how they look and how the birds sing
And think too of a butterfly with all its colours, amazing to the human eye
And then there's us, how great we are
We can see, smell and touch and do so much
So when things are dark and seem grey
Try and think what you can do today
Make someone laugh or make someone smile or do something nice that lasts a while or try and capture something bright
Maybe a human ray of light
Whatever it is you plan to do
Always try and let the light shine through
Copyright ©
SweetRhythm
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2004-05-16 15:48:36]
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Re: The Sun Still Shines
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 04:16:15 PM AEST
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A beautifull, up beat write.
Great job.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Sun Still Shines
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 04:21:53 PM AEST
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your light shines in this write
Shari |
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Re: The Sun Still Shines
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by Key-holeGolf on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:12:39 PM AEST
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You're a positive soul!!!
however, i think there's a good life lesson in "make someone lauch or make someone smile or do something nice that last a while". Cool write and nice topic, makes this poem useful. = ) |
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