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Snails Adventure to Get the Mail
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:02:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Hi, Im a Snail,
And My Name Is Gail.
This is my House, and its a Shell.
Im getting ready to go and get my mail.
But first I have to get across this rail.
So I start across and take a deep breath and inhale.
But before I could finish getting across this rail,
I run into this quail.
His name was Dale.
He told me he would help me get my mail.
But before we could get there, I fell.
I fell Right on to the back of this Whale.
Her name was Mel.
She said she would get me to my mail.
But Before I could get there I slid off Mel.
And slid right on to a ducks tail.
But The Duck got mad and tried to eat me like I was a piece of Kale.
So I let out a wail,
And then I climb onto a fishs tail.
Her name was Bell.
She got me to my mail.
But Now I got to figure out how Im going to get back to my shell.
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sugar0986
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Re: Snails Adventure to Get the Mail
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by Jolly on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:40:45 PM AEST
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| So that's why my mail's always late. And why it took 6 weeks for my package to get to Italy!!!! that was really a great piece of work. |
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Re: Snails Adventure to Get the Mail
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by Key-holeGolf on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:06:58 PM AEST
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this is sweet!!!
can you leave a post on here, cos i'd really like to know what was in the mail, and how it was gonna fit in the shell!!!
:D
Cool world, cool poem!
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Re: Snails Adventure to Get the Mail
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:13:34 PM AEST
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Well, this is delightful. I shall print it and read it to my little grandson. He has quite an imagination and can expect quite a conversation off of this one. LOL
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Re: Snails Adventure to Get the Mail
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by dragon on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 02:01:38 AM AEST
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I think is poem is very neat and well done, snails are one my fav fish tank buddies and while I was reading this I couldnt help but imange seeing this poem come to life in my mind. This is a poem I will print and share with my friends. Thanks for sharing this masterpiece with the rest of us
keep up the great work
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