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Will Hurt Stop?
Contributed by
carebear
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:02:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart hurts,
I can't kill the pain,
I listen to the falling rain,
Another tear runs down my face,
I'm always waiting to feel your embrace,
To see your face would make me glad,
Under dark clouds I'm always sad,
Petals fall from a red rose to the floor,
Drying up as quick as you walked out slamming,
That door crushing my heart never have I felt,
This much pain someday will it go away?
Care 5/17/04
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2004-05-17 01:02:13]
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Re: Will Hurt Stop?
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:07:42 AM AEST
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your pain tugs at the heartstrings Im so sorry for your hurt. Its so hard when someone walks away.
Though its painful you wrote this beautifully
Michelle
(yes it does go away in time and someone will come along and show you love like youve never known trust me) |
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Re: Will Hurt Stop?
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by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:49:34 PM AEST
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as eternal such pain may feel, it will pass, bringing new hope and love...
a dab of care, a pinch of love, a smidgen of friendship, and a little time is the perfect remedy...
Please, bear the pain, and please take care...
As painful as it may be, a beautiful write has been inspired, no doubt.... talented...
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: Will Hurt Stop?
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:20:56 PM AEST
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will it ever go away
i dont know i ask the same question
Wayne |
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