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My internet friend........
Contributed by
ravisada
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:01:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Sitting front of my computer
and waiting for your mails
When ever I hear from you
my days are brighten
No body has ever spoke to me
the way you do
Even our friendship exists
through the net
Though I have not seen your face
I have not heard your voice
I don't know who you are
But I know what ever you say
that's comes from your heart
I have pictured you what I think of you
perhaps you too have done it
I thank you for considering me
your email friend
I am glad that I met you
Now you are my best internet friend
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright 2004 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2004-05-17 02:01:24]
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Re: My internet friend........
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:43:10 AM AEST
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very sweet
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Re: My internet friend........
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:40:34 AM AEST
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yes i agree with shelby,
very very sweet, caring and touching poem.
i really liked the flow here.
it was errrr...hmmm..how to say..magnificent
yep that's it hehe.
that person should be very very grateful to have a friend like you.
keep writing ravi,
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Re: My internet friend........
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:19:32 AM AEST
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Lovely thoughts...
Jenni |
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Re: My internet friend........
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:18:12 PM AEST
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Nice poem.
I'm not a poetry professional, but I think that your writing could use more color. The idea is nice, now use a variety of words to express emotion. Overall it has a good flow, good job :) |
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