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Speaking From The Soul
Contributed by
springchic1979
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Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Decide if you will live a lie By being insincere Selecting only certain words Which people want to hear. Committing yourself to pleasing Everyone else but you-- Digging yourself a deeper grave With every word you spew. Removing every minute trace Of what you once had been Making all that remains of you An 'exoskeleton'. Spineless, sagacious shell, shattered By bad banalities; Common clichs, anecdotes, and Pre-rehearsed pleasantries. It is not fair to simply smile And fool with false pretense; I would prefer you speak your mind Then suffer in silence. I do suggest you sound your voice With truth and dignity Retaining professional poise With your sincerity: Engage with an affluent tongue, Adopt a mannered tone, Determine a worthy approach To make your feelings known. There is, however, one detail That you cannot control: The price you may be forced to pay When speaking from the soul. So choose locutions carefully Not all wounds can be healed... Remember when words are spoken They cannot be repealed.
Yvonne Denise Springer Copyright 2002 Yvonne Denise Springer
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Re: Speaking From The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lia on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 07:00:11 AM AEST (User
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This is great...I love the message it gives.. |
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Re: Speaking From The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 07:19:44 AM AEST (User
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I really love your work and this one is brialliant. At first I thought you were telling one person, but then I realized that you were speaking to everyone (I think).
What great words, especially - "Spineless, sagacious shell, shattered by bad banalities; Common clichés, anecdotes, and pre-rehearsed pleasantries." Superb. |
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Re: Speaking From The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 01:47:51 AM AEST (User
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I am glad you liked it Lia, thank you for taking the time to respond! :)
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Re: Speaking From The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 01:59:50 AM AEST (User
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Thank you so much for commenting Dreamweaver. You made my day!
You are correct though, DreamWeaver, I was speaking to everyone...yet no one in particular, hehe.
Yvonne
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Re: Speaking From The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:27:43 PM AEST (User
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keep writing in the
future ciao for now . |
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Re: Speaking From The Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by springchic1979 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 10:50:59 AM AEST (User
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I will Sarah22! I love to write :)
Yvonne |
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