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now gravity kills
Contributed by
lexxie
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:11:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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were losing control
emotion is over coming our closed in minds
emotion seeping through the drains
into our hearts
pour out of our eyes
and feel the inside
it hurts
heart made of thorns
stabbing at our minds
draining our emotion
emotion becomes tears
cry
cry to the world
no one hears
stabbed minds
beating hearts
faliling to keep beating
dying
falling into the shadows
black holes inside our stabbed
minds
now gravity kills
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lexxie
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2004-05-17 18:11:23]
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Re: now gravity kills
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:58:17 AM AEST
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| nice job. didn't i read in your profile that you're 13 years old? if so- WOW. keep writing. |
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Re: now gravity kills
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 10:52:51 AM AEST
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if you truly are 13, as the last commenter said, then keep it up. there are LOTS of amazing writers that are very young, and lots of poets in general that write very maturely, yourself included.
i love this poem...very deep, and dark...the best poems always just bleed with raw emotion.
i absolutely love it.
- Bethani -
(15 yrs. old) |
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