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Thief
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:08:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Lay me down
In an unfamiliar place
And steal secrets from me
Make me trust
In an unabashed way
And take moments from me
Hold me close
In an uncomfortable way
And draw life from me
Let me go
In an unforeseen end
And take something from me.
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
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2004-05-17 19:08:32]
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Re: Thief
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:28:13 PM AEST
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very emotional write. powerful and to the point.
the voice
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Re: Thief
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:34:44 AM AEST
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Oooooh! Nice. What an interesting take on relationship.
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Re: Thief
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:45:59 AM AEST
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Sometimes love can be so draining...
Good and recognizable write!
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Re: Thief
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:14:19 AM AEST
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makes you think doesn't it? an excellent piece of work.
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Re: Thief
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:10:59 PM AEST
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so heartfelt so concise.. one thing im not good at
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Re: Thief
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:57:13 AM AEST
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this is excellent:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Thief
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:56:34 AM AEST
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Short, sweet and powerful. Its amazing how you managed to get so much depth into so few words. Gorgeous.
Take Care
-Becca
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Re: Thief
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 04:02:46 AM AEST
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Damn, when I saw the title I was thinking of something else. I'm sure you know. You know where my brain has been at the past few weeks. But yeah, again, I relate to this so much.
Talk about short, powerful, and to the point.
Very well written.
Thank you,
Timber
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Re: Thief
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 11:51:19 AM AEST
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This is an excellent example of how it is possible to express deep feelings effectively and efficiently with an economy of words. As I read the last line, my first thought was how this poem reminds me of Emily Dickenson. This is a jewel!
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