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I Love My New Sandals!!!
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:41:54 PM in AEST
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When I was just young
Bout four or eight
My mom was poor
And life was great
We had a house
A happy home
My clothes were clean
My hair was combd
I had enough
Wore a true smile
Til Id espied
The coolest style
Theyre just so cute
And Im so keen
They come in blue
And pink and green
The shoes of choice
Oh mommy dear
Buy them!
Ill be good all year!
They light up bright
A pretty red
A shoe with lights
Inside its tread
Its all I want
Its true! I swear!
Not even a
New teddy bear.
How I begged
Yes, I did plead
Professing that shoes
Were all Id need
The flashing lights
Fascinated me
And sent me on
A smiling spree
The years went by
The gifts were few
But none of them
Were my prized shoes
Around age twelve
I gave it up
Forgot the shoes
My hopes burned up
Once in a while
Id see some sneaks
And hence a smile
Came oer my cheeks
A few requests
One here, one there
Those light up shoes
Were everywhere
Then one fine day
At age sixteen
My mom comes home
To make a scene
She said, This is
For all the times
Of just one thing
You were deprived.
She dropped a bag
Onto the floor
The sight of lights
Made my heart soar
Just when I thought
It was the best
I saw it all
I saw the rest
First they lit up
My favorite trick
AND they were sandals
Oh! What a kick!
Not one pair,
Nope, mom bought two
One in purple
One green and blue
The lights are blue
The sandals white
A splash of color
For my delight
But most of all
I saw the love
And all the dire
Id scarce knew of
Although the times
Were less than slick
Moms love fixed things
So smooth and quick
And even now
That were not poor
She makes it up
With gifts galore
Im glad that life
Is tranquil now
At least in terms
Of wrinkled brows
We worry less
We laugh a lot
And loves the thing
Weve always got
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liquidsunshine
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:53:09 PM AEST
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This is such a refreshing write... Thank you for sharing it....and for the memories..
Jenni |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by lifefliesby on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:59:29 PM AEST
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great great write
it really is
keep it up.... both writing and your spirits
"bravo and encore" galore
love always,
Jared |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:46:20 AM AEST
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| hehe... this is cute... thanks for sharing...made me smile! |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:19:14 AM AEST
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| This is wonderful. It may have taken a few years, but it payed off. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:38:37 PM AEST
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| i agree with the comment that this is refreshing - totally agree - very nicely written. the opening lines grip you in nicely... well done!!! |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by kittie30 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:48:40 PM AEST
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| it was a great write i found it kinda funny and yea we all need love some time in our lives:) |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:24:08 PM AEST
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This was a really cute poem. I love sandals so much! I wear them rain or shine....I wish I could find some cool ones that would light up! How fun!
~Carrie~ |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:57:10 PM AEST
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Aww, how charming...
(sorry to sound so patronizing there... but I'm past the days of sandals...)
I like the love behind it too.
Andrew |
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Re: I Love My New Sandals!!!
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:57:17 PM AEST
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That's cool, I really liked it! And you also kept the rhyme through the whole thing really well...
Take care... smile!
David |
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