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The Realities of War
Contributed by
coaster
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:33:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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As an angels acid tear runs down the earth Killings in the war for what America is worth Bloodstains will only seek through the soil thats red As a soldier screaming is left to be dead No real reason for people pleading to live No real reason to take when you can always give
Fear overcomes a soldiers dying eyes As he reaches out to touch the sky Holding his friends hand sayin, "I dont wanna die" Starts to loose grip and the whole world seems to cry Thinking to himself why the ?? is this my life?! Knowing what he has to tell the mans two sons and wife
Sadness comes when all the plants begin to sprout Looking at red where the soldiers took their rout He wasnt left to live but he was left to be at doubt And all happiness once had will only slip into a drought This ?? is never gonna be what life is all about Because the way back in will never be the way back out
As if it was at innocence only his right to bleed Over a greedy feeling that felt the need to concede Crying and screaming until the blood makes him choke ******************** laughing like its some joke Video taped for his wife, daughter, and sons to see Murder not on the third, second, but the first degree
The clouds in the air will begin to only split Shining on the lifeless is when the pain will hit Teardrop drops towards the bottomless abyss Stiff as a stone his emotions are nothing near bliss And for those of you who only choose to ignore Realize now that these are only the realities of war
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2004-05-17 21:33:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Realities of War
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:43:01 PM AEST (User
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OMG I got the chills now. The reality of war is extremely painful. I see this on the news every day. It makes me sick. War does not justify any means. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The Realities of War
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:30:19 AM AEST (User
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War is indeed a terribly wasteful and grievous thing. But I think it necessary sometimes. Only in such a messed-up world as this could such a terrible thing ever be a right course.
Very emotional and vivid. Well done.
Andrew |
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