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Single Star
Contributed by
TheReturnOfx7
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Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:57:43 PM in AEST
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Wrapped within velvet darkness
a single star, twinkleing rays of light
Giving off a subtle glow, determined not to fade
Refuseing to hide from the world, craving to be seen
That tiny twinkling star, can be compared to my heart
As I remember how special it was to be noticed
Realizing now that no wound is ever beyond repair
That ball of fire still burns in my chest
Tirelessly searching for a place to call its home
Right now, I've got to be that single star in the sky
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Re: Single Star
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:02:16 AM AEST
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Ugh... too hope-filled and optimistic for me right now. lol. But beautifully written, as always.
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Re: Single Star
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:40:40 PM AEST
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I like this, nice comparison, good flow and imagery. Write on and Peace to you.
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