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Red Tears
Contributed by
Amanda_Interrupted
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:28:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Red Tears
Sitting on a cold bathroom floor
Its almost morning but she cant sleep
Shes got a razor in one hand
And no control in the other
She cries red tears
While her pain runs down her legs
She relates peace
With pieces of herself
Theres darkness in the room
She cant look upon her pain
Long sleeves in the summer
No umbrella for the rain
Shes finally calm enough to go to sleep
Only fearing tomorrow will be worse
And shell find herself again
Sitting on a cold bathroom floor
Its almost morning but she cant sleep
Shes got a razor in one hand
And no control in the other
She cries red tears
While her pain runs down her legs
She relates peace
With pieces of herself
Copyright@ Amanda Bentley
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Amanda_Interrupted
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2004-05-18 04:28:28]
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Re: Red Tears
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:37:15 AM AEST
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Dark and scraping..it brings chill to my heart...
Hugs,
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Re: Red Tears
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:13:11 AM AEST
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| well written.. |
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Re: Red Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:42:27 AM AEST
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Chilling write.......
Jenni |
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Re: Red Tears
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:19:55 AM AEST
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| This is deep, and I loved it. I can relate to it to be honest. I think you did a very good job. Keep up the good work! ~Stace~ |
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Re: Red Tears
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by true_poetry_writer on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:08:37 AM AEST
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I can relate to that a lot from my personal view. That was really dark and deep
-kim- |
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Re: Red Tears
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by taintedmind on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:02:17 AM AEST
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| this poem is awesome dark and literal i can feel your pain |
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