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Starry Night
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:23:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I look at the stars at night, as they glitter so so bright
They twinkle as they move around
Yet their a long way from the ground
If I could hold one in my hand, it would be owe so grand
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SweetRhythm
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2004-05-18 08:23:10]
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Re: Starry Night
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:28:09 AM AEST
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Nice, sweet and gentle poem!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Starry Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:05:38 PM AEST
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I don't know what age you were but it was certainly apparent you had talent even then. Keep writing because you do have depth in your work. I will keep watching to see how your work evolves. I think you are terrific.
Rita |
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Re: Starry Night
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:52:15 PM AEST
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wonderful! so special you saved it:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Starry Night
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by jan on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:57:31 PM AEST
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So Sweet! You and I would have made great pals. I can see we look at the stars in a similar way!
I look forward to reading more of your work. :) |
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Re: Starry Night
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by drinkWATER on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:51:35 AM AEST
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original for the fact that you kept it so long
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