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Disgust
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:48:17 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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People thieving everywhere
Others grieving in despair
It's never ending, always more
People woundering what is the score
I'm sure it's awful in your mind
But we really must put it behind
Try and relax and start to unwind
And start to give and start to be kind
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2004-05-18 09:48:17]
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Re: Disgust
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:02:29 AM AEST
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What you say is right about good conquering evil. It doesn't always look like that though. Many are decieved by this Worlds riches.
Poem is a little different to what I have come to expect on this list I give you four points for innovation.
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Re: Disgust
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:34:37 PM AEST
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wow really nice poem mate enjoyed the read
'I'm sure it's awful in your mind
But we really must put it behind'
- very nice lines
-feel free to comment on my poetry...
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Re: Disgust
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:43:54 AM AEST
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Great Poem
Short but sweet
Nice Write
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