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In Time
Contributed by
alwys2nv
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:13:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Going to the bathroom
to wash my hands they think
but im going to the bathroom
to hold my hands over the sink
blinded by the razors shine like many times before
but this time i will take my time and i wont fall to the floor
when the razor meets my skin
skin begins to part slowly
and my dark red blood begins to run thin
I do not stop I do not dare
of all the things i must'nt fail
there wasnt one day that i was just fine
no one believed me they did'nt hear my cry
no one could help me i had no favors
not even my self i had no saviors
after to night i'll be just fine
all of my sadness will be shown in time
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2004-05-18 11:13:46]
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Re: In Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:44:55 AM AEST
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its wierd that you've written this. it happened to me last night, apart from the fact that i did it in my room, not the bathroom.
i'd told my friend that i was gonna do it,she jut said that she wasn't going to talk to me if i was gonna say stupid things like that. i did it all the same though...
then she rang m back, asking how i was. i couldn't lie! SHE SAID THAT WAS WORRID ABOUT ME. i was trying to explain that i'd be fine now that i'd done it, she just wouldn't understand... but i know my sadness will come out sooner or later, so i'm not that worred about her...
any way, enough about me. you're poem was excellent!!! i love it. it says what i am and what i feel. |
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