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alone
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:29:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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there is no sun in the sky
no song in the wind
no rain in my hand
no moon in my song
no stars in my eyes
no peace in my heart
no hope in my dreams
no life in my soul
no blood in my limbs
i am alone
all eyes look away
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Luinil
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2004-05-18 12:29:29]
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Re: alone
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:46:46 PM AEST
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strong ...keep up the good work
but know deep within is a light
which can bring back the life to your soul...you need only look...I know for I have been there
Shari |
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Re: alone
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:48:53 PM AEST
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if all eyes were looking away, i doubt you'd still be around to tell about it! hope the loneliness doesn't drag you down too much, good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: alone
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by jan on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:36:42 PM AEST
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| Beautifully sad. I find when I am lost in a dark place, that words help heal. I hope that peace, hope and song return to your life soon. |
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