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A world sang a song
Contributed by
TheSchroedmeister
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A world sang a song
that began with
maybe
No one heard its song
Undaunted,
it began again with
sorrow
Again,
no one heard its song
It sang the sweetest
tune of all
that started with its
pain
It saw a child turn
to it, then quickly turn
again
Continents clashed as
it hit discord,
mountain pyres scorched
its heavens,
trembles
rocked its aching
breast, and
while eternity mocked
a weeping world,
its own earth eaten by
its saddest rains,
no song brought
warmth, no
selfless time
because within
our own
atmospheres,
we seldom hear
anothers
pain
Copyright ©
TheSchroedmeister
... [
2004-05-18 13:44:51]
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Re: A world sang a song
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by arden on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:50:39 PM AEST
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this was a great write.
very well written.
i enjoyed this.
greatly done. keep up the awesome works.
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Re: A world sang a song
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:30:55 PM AEST
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peculiar story, almost too broad to grasp... but i think i've got it... good poetry!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: A world sang a song
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:45:22 AM AEST
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How very true, it is a selfish world sometimes. I say keep smiling .
bernard. |
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Re: A world sang a song
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:29:17 PM AEST
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brilliant write, and so true, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A world sang a song
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:31:34 AM AEST
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Gah! Why couldn't I think up an analogy as vibrant and as excellent as this?
. . . perhaps because I just couldn't. This was meant for you to find, and for you alone to write, in your own inimitable style. You consistently improve both your work and my expectations every time I visit your pile.
A thousand pairs of clapping hands, I give you. |
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Re: A world sang a song
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:58:29 PM AEST
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I really enjoy your work,but i sooo expected this one to end with "song"!!
terrific.
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Re: A world sang a song
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:07:38 PM AEST
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It saw a child turn
to it, then quickly turn
again
You had me interested from the very beginning but these particular lines absolutely grabbed hold of me. It become very real right just then.
You have amazing talent... Well done!
SNM |
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Re: A world sang a song
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by HorizonGirl on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:24:10 AM AEST
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| That was truly an awesome poem very strong in it's meaning! |
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