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i Feel You Dont Hurt Me
Contributed by
chaos_wizard
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:48:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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if you cry i feel it, your tears are sharp and they are piercing at my heart.
Please Dont Hurt Me!
You kill me with every tear and laugh you make. When i see you with him it is like stabbing me in the back.
Please Dont Hurt Me!
When you walk away or hang up on the phone just to go and think about what will happen next then all of sudden you start crying the tears roll down your face and that is when i cant breathe my heart is bleeding with all the wounds you gave me .
Please Dont Hurt Me!
Or
Is It
I
That Is Hurting You
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2004-05-18 14:48:11]
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Re: i Feel You Dont Hurt Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:57:14 PM AEST
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| Wow, I really liked this poem. The ending has a really interesting twist and it's so sad. I'm sorry if this happened to you but you got an awesome poem out of it! |
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Re: i Feel You Dont Hurt Me
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:58:48 PM AEST
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most the time it hink it works both ways, just both parties don't realize they're the cause... love the chaos and confusion displayed here! good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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