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The Scars
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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To see all the years of pain and hurt,
And from feeling like I belonged in the dirt,
Take a little look down at my arm,
And there youll see a worshipper of self harm.
Sometimes I cant bear to look and feel ashamed,
That the hurt in my past has left me maimed,
Ashamed of dragging glass/scissors across my skin,
To get a release and let the pain seep from within.
I remember feeling numb, until I saw the blood,
It sounds really weird, but I began to feel good,
I felt like I had found a new friend,
One who was forever at hand with relief to lend.
My emotional scars have long begun the healing process,
But my once lovely arms are now left a mess,
I wish that I could have found a better way,
Than butchering my arms up day after day.
I often see people staring,
At the evidence of all the slashing and tearing,
The disgusted looks, if only they knew,
What desperate things desperate people do.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-05-18 15:07:15]
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Re: The Scars
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by Another_Dimension on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:21:50 PM AEST
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| A poem i just read was called, 'I bleed to feel' thats exactly what i do... amazing write, top notch x |
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Re: The Scars
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:45:46 PM AEST
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I've not been commenting on poems in a while, but after reading this i felt i had no choice. This is an absolutely incredible poem which touched my heart.. i feel this way so often, too often.. the last line was so powerful.. hell the whole thing was. Great stuff.. hope to see more from you soon..
charlotte x_x_x
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Re: The Scars
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:56:33 PM AEST
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| oi... this is powerful... |
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Re: The Scars
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by StrangeLittleGirl on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:22:34 PM AEST
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| WOW. Brilliant poem. (I have some poems on the same subject. I will post them soon) Well done. :) |
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Re: The Scars
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by carebear on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:20:40 PM AEST
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| i did that stuff too i've been clean for 2 monthes... |
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