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forced farewell
Contributed by
dantoad
on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 09:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Like my father
you have given up your right to me
have lost my custody
you are no one to me
You want nothing to do with me
won't see me on the weekends
hell, at least you kissed me goodbye
But i had secrets too
i wanted to be emancipated
i hate being beat to something
but apparently we agreed
You stole a chunk of my heart
no, you couldn't have
you just tore me from myself
but i am now reglued
I can't talk to you now
but i'll never see you
hide and i'll find you
but maybe i'll leave you.
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dantoad
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2002-10-09 09:15:00]
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Re: forced farewell
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by hot_topic on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 06:40:19 AM AEST
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very good! i wish i could do poetry like u! u actually know how to express it good! and hell, mann, u r good! lol anyway i just wanted to say that u are a damn good writer! L8ER
( look for some of my poetry that i put out) one of them are " heaven to hell" |
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