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Pain
Contributed by
Kusum
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:51:54 PM in AEST
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Memories of the past make me sad
But you say not to feel so bad
Whenever I try to talk about pain
You dismiss it telling in-vain
How can I live with such feelings?
Hiding tears and only smiles revealing
You only tell me what to do and what not to
But why dont u think its false, not true
Now its enough, I can take it no more
I dont want to live, no, not any more
Copyright ©
Kusum
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2004-05-18 17:51:54]
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Re: Pain
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:09:32 PM AEST
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| You made what your feeling clear.Ya know if you ever need to talk I am here.I know you dont know me,but I can listen.I understand how it is having to hide your feelings. |
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Re: Pain
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:29:23 PM AEST
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Wow, that was a wonderful piece. You really wrote something I could relate to. I'm sorry that you have to go through pain. Maybe someday things will change. Good luck and don't give up.
Katie |
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Re: Pain
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:37:43 PM AEST
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good poem, sad topic. i'm sorry if u really feel that way. i'm here if u ever need someone to talk to.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Pain
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by Ravisada on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:01:35 AM AEST
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a nice poem
well written
thanks for sharing with me
Ravi |
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