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THE DARK HORSE
Contributed by
twinkletoes
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:40:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Where has the sunshine gone?
Lost in outer-space?
My smile vanished in an instant,
gone without a trace.
Where did my happiness go,
what changed my pleasant course?
They disappeared when he came back!
That ~evil~ darkened horse.
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twinkletoes
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2004-05-18 18:40:45]
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:02:39 PM AEST
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Damn that horse, eh?
A very well put, agressive write.
Bravo and encore.
Love,
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 07:54:05 PM AEST
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Hi, my friend. I am not sure I understand what it means, but I do like the poem.
Rita |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by aaaka on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:17:31 PM AEST
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| I loved it. Nicely done |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:56:09 PM AEST
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brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:10:38 AM AEST
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| welldone..venkat |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:46:13 AM AEST
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Am i right in saying this is about mood swings, depression etc? whatever it's about it has a certain flow and style to it.
Well done once again!
wildejohnny. |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:39:14 AM AEST
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| Get the reins out indeed!...ride my friend ride that dark horse...lest you fall beneath its hooves such a terrible calamity...may you have a splendid ride and break in that terrible mustang...ride the dark horse my friend. Ha ha ha... may you ride in interesting times through scenic terrains. |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 04:44:50 AM AEST
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| Yep, I know the feeling. Very well-written piecem I loved it. |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 06:32:22 PM AEST
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| nice write short and to the point i like it |
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Re: THE DARK HORSE
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:53:28 PM AEST
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| i liked this you had a nice flow and rhyme |
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