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Diminishing Veiws
Contributed by
jt
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:38:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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No familiar
shapes retained
No pleasant
images of trees
of sea and sky
No colours
of green fields
But huge and mighty forms
that do not live
like living men
Moving slowly
through the mind by day
and were a trouble
to my dreams at night
His children have not
reached their saviour
They shall be crushed
without reason or mercy
at the gate
Copyright ©
jt
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2004-05-19 02:38:20]
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Re: Diminishing Veiws
(User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:30:25 AM AEST
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| Hmmm. Interesting and engaging poem. Sounds like you're describing shadow people to me in the first few lines. |
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Re: Diminishing Veiws
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by Jaded-Sunrise on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:30:43 AM AEST
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| Very Interesting Poem.Makes you think.I like that.Good Job |
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