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My Bleeding Heart
Contributed by
vampiricsuccubus
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:59:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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What's wrong with you?
Don't you understand,
that's my bleeding heart
In your hands.
Don't you understand
I gave it to you,
with all the love
I feel for you?
But you wouldn't
take it, you couldn't.
Weren't ready for the
one girl who would
readily give you anything
and everything that you asked.
Can't you see
the way that I feel?
My heart has been
given to only you,
yet you couldn't love me.
You can't love just me.
I love you, yet my heart
Is better off in splinters,
shards scattered across
the floor.
Copyright ©
vampiricsuccubus
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2004-05-19 02:59:18]
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by Another_Dimension on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:55:35 AM AEST
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| I like that word splinters, think i will progress on that. very nice. very heart-felt, touched me. x 4/5 |
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:59:23 AM AEST
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well written...emotions strong...
and your heart will move on piece itself back together and fly toward another heart...it's the way of life
Shari |
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by tamilyn on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:41:12 AM AEST
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Well written. I'm sorry for your pain.
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by charmer on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:12:59 AM AEST
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Sorry about this guy! I seem to have the same problem myself!!!
Hugs,
CHARMER |
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