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Static
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:22:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Static
Stone figurine
Still life while others soar
Portrait of a passage frozen
In its wake a desperate longing gnaws
Searching, forking for a wave to surge me forward
This lazy-eyed existence disguised as activity
Truth is, it does no good to cling to hollow mirages when it proves
Static.
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2004-05-19 04:22:51]
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Re: Static
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:48:57 AM AEST
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Very good and very recognizable! I loved to read it.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Static
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:00:56 AM AEST
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Excellent short poem.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Hope you enjoy yourself at college - I'm sure the pace will pick up thereafter . . . |
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Re: Static
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:08:57 AM AEST
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| Awww..wonderful feelings though static.. welldone. venkat |
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Re: Static
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:29:07 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, short, sweet and to the point. Extemely awesome poem. |
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Re: Static
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:51:21 PM AEST
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Being in college, I think you've summed up exceptionally well. But I'm sure you'll do just fine, you'll make it through.
Great write, short and thoroughly enjoyable. |
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Re: Static
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:19:24 AM AEST
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i'm sure you will soar too! good poem and good luck for the following year.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Static
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by arden on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:49:23 AM AEST
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you have an amazing use of words in all of your poems. this i can kinda relate too.
nicely done.
Arden |
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Re: Static
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by wray on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:58:21 AM AEST
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| Wow, I felt a similar way when I started uni last year. Maybe it was all the angsty music. But a fantastic poem. Btw I was born in Malaysia! *hugs* |
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