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Seranova Celestine
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:57:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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~"Lest dawns shalt catch these mis'ries mine,
I'll naught but sever Clementine.
Should ever once those eyes in mine,
in aches past mem'ries leave me blind."
Take me to my rustic home
And neer ask my name again
Hide me thither past the tomes
Ill never speak a word again
Leave me in my curled calms,
Or cause me fragile pain
The echoes of beloved qualms
Draw scars from scrubbing stains
Ive quilted falsehood, sewn my lies
Done all the things I so despise
Excused my failures, kissed good byes
(Therell be no one last try.)
Return me to my meadow Fife
And golden oceans deep
Ive lived enough, most tender life
Now all I crave is sleep
~A last greeting to the days to never come.
And the tears to never go.
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EternitysLyre
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Re: Seranova Celestine
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:05:05 AM AEST
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| Excellent..a little master piece. venkat |
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Re: Seranova Celestine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:27:16 AM AEST
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I think i see how you used the notion of 'retirement', for lack of a better phrase, to thread a theme (quilted falsehood/sewn my lies?) . . . but I still need to read it over again, as usual.
Nice rhythm, by the way.
Another instructional inspiration. |
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Re: Seranova Celestine
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:26:31 AM AEST
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Wow! This should be published... really...
Love the title... Wish I had come up with that myself. |
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Re: Seranova Celestine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:24:38 PM AEST
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I love the flow, the rhythm, the meaning and the inner beauty this poem holds. Well done eternity...
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Seranova Celestine
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by Archie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:20:26 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem. |
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