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Goodbye My 'Friend'
Contributed by
Shawn_Radley
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 01:12:29 PM in AEST
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I smell the fire that burns inside.
The hatred you feel, the look in your eyes.
I helped you out when you were trapped,
Yet I am the one you stab in the back.
You apologised right, then,
You go and do it all over again.
They hate your friendship, I'm sick of it too,
But most of all I'm sick of you.
You hurt me, you used me and inside you bruised me,
And when your secrets were out you accused me.
I cannot do this anymore.
The wounds are open and already sore.
But now I must learn to trust again.
So I say this to you..."Goodbye my 'friend'."
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2004-05-19 13:12:29]
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Re: Goodbye My 'Friend'
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:16:45 PM AEST
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| ah i know i know...so much I know how your feeling i hated being in that situation...but honestly it made our relationship better...i mean only cuz we both have good hearts...and im not sure how your friend is...but maybe if you talk to her...well anyways great write...awesome flow...keep it coming!!! |
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Re: Goodbye My 'Friend'
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by StrangeLittleGirl on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:36:29 PM AEST
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| well my lil shawny wawny, you clearly are a good writer, all 3 of your poems are great and really show your emotions :) keep it up buddy |
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