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My Dying Story (A Dark Poem)
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 01:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I lie on my floor
smelling my blood
all around
I see Eternity
pure white light
and my scattered dreams
like lingering smoke
hover around my dying body
as I stare at the black ceiling
with glowing stick-on stars
my door opens
as he steps in, yelling for help
lifting my mangled body
from the bloodstained floor
he carries me from this hell house
blood dripping, life slipping
like water in a sieve
he lays me on the ground
his tears rinsing the blood from my face
as I gasp 'I love you'
one last time
before i'm gone
watching his grief-stricken face
all the way to Heaven
Copyright ©
kailadragon
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2004-05-19 13:24:22]
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Re: My Dying Story (A Dark Poem)
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 01:32:15 PM AEST
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Very powerful stuff, well worded and a great use of imagination :O)
takecare
Pixie xxx |
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