|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Free-Dinner Coupons
Contributed by
sweet-poison
on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:16:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Look at you now,
With your red, painted lips,
And mile long, black lashes,
With your hair in perfect, glossy curls,
And dainty gems in your ears.
You're beautiful,
With your powder pink dress,
And your stiletto heals,
With your matching diamant handbag,
And your free-dinner coupons.
You're so elegant,
With your rented life,
And borrowed trimmings,
With your fake identity,
And stolen dreams.
You're so brave,
With your customised, charity dress,
And shoes you found, and fixed yourself,
With the hand bag you stole from your neighbour,
And your hair you washed in the rain.
You're so low,
With the hate you feel when you're alone,
And the blood you spill for attention,
With the suicide note you leave for no-one,
And you know you wont be found.
Copyright ©
sweet-poison
... [
2004-05-19 14:16:32]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Free-Dinner Coupons
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:17:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Slightly disturbing....I LOVE IT!! :D |
|
|
Re: Free-Dinner Coupons
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:33:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
yes - disturbing, seconded...
the stolen handbag shows the larceny in the soul I guess. |
|
|
Re: Free-Dinner Coupons
(User Rating: 1 )
by ammalu on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:21:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well narrated - yes,we find such 'people'
- good write.
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
