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An Angel Without Prayer
Contributed by
Black13
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Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 04:16:36 PM in AEST
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Maybe it's true that I never loved you.
I always said that I was the bad one.
Always gave you just what you wanted, though.
But what could you have wanted with my life?
I only wanted to make you happy.
Yet, somehow you laid my whole life to waste.
Sometimes it's that life that I can taste.
So it's in my darkness that I dwell now.
Leave me be so my mind can stray.
Don't need the wounds that I carry to heal.
Let me bleed freely while I cut my heart out for you.
Allow me to slay heaven so I may finally weep.
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Black13
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2004-05-19 16:16:36]
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Re: An Angel Without Prayer
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:15:27 PM AEST
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nice start anyway some lovely images - maybe it needs some kind of resolution or maybe its best left in the air...
feel free to comment on my poems... |
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Re: An Angel Without Prayer
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 06:40:24 PM AEST
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Awesome poem buddy. I loved it all it was all so poignant, yet despairing. 'Leave me be so my mind can stray.' I love that line since I can relate to it so much.
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Re: An Angel Without Prayer
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:00:18 PM AEST
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this is really good and i hope u repost once u've got it done. i'd luv to read the rest and more people probally do to.
keep it up
~allyson~ |
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Re: An Angel Without Prayer
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:35:50 AM AEST
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You remind me so much of my son in this one. Almost made me cry. There's so much I could say, I can't say anything.
Stitch |
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Re: An Angel Without Prayer
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:26:45 PM AEST
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| the hurt is so deep it seems we may never heal i love the way you express yourself well done |
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