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Our home the people the world.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:53:37 AM in AEST
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The day goes on
The night passes by
We live each day
With such un-care
Some live for day
Some live for night
We live each day
With such un-care
A wasted day
A wasted night
We live each day
With such un-care
We kill each other
We love each other
We live each day
With such un-care
As I view my world
My own suroundings
The world of what we call our home
This nation as one
This world together
We live too kill each other
A world of hate
Not of love
Cant we all just be get along?
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2004-05-20 00:53:37]
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Re: Our home the people the world.
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:44:05 AM AEST
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could use a little proof-reading otherwise a good job.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Our home the people the world.
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:35:06 PM AEST
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Nice write I like those. Good thought ,loved the content .
And Yes the Worlds Misery is un-care.
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Re: Our home the people the world.
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:53:47 PM AEST
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| interesting perspective and very true at times. well theres a caveman inside all of us who just wants to kill everyone else i suppose. fantastic write though. |
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