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A Fool's Deer
Contributed by
Naijerana
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:42:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My essence, My essence of life, is flooding out of me
That what whans ran like a deer
through my body, will soon be all gone
and the terror that i whans lived
will be ended
will i come to a river
or must i speak the nine mysterious names
Will i stay here and live
Or will i walk alone with grief
Where joy and happiness should be
Or will He be angry, for what if done to me self
And will he let me life
To.live a life of sorrow and solitary
And to let me beg of mercy to Him
But now i ask Him and my self, why...
Why should i beg for mercy to Him
While he has stolen my life, my loves
But no longer
Now i my self have taking it and not He
And now I will see them after many years
My torment, my solitary, will come to a end
But does not He control us all
So then this is not I who is taking my own live
But still He so this is only
A fools deer
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Re: A Fool's Deer
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:23:39 AM AEST
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Dont' worry about that. Everyone does it at least once. The duplicate poem will be removed in due time. Good write, by the way - I like the deer analogy. It works quite well.
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