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compilation
Contributed by
gary
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:08:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The smells and emotions, the sky rains warm.
The soaking showers, a taste of sweet droplets.
The light Joys, of a full tear, falls.
My peal, on my cheek.
Vaguely dim and subliminal.
A slow and warm rain busts warm, alleviating air.
Running down my back and pounding my heart.
Back, and forth.
Freedom, as love is the birth.
I felt past memories move.
Then gave me honor.
Copyright ©
gary
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2004-05-20 10:08:41]
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Re: compilation
(User Rating: 1 )
by Angelchild on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:25:18 AM AEST
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| umm.. this was good. I'm not sure I am awake enough to fully understand it, but it still sounded good to me. |
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Re: compilation
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by Remy on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:14:52 PM AEST
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good writing, keep testing those waters - but don't get lost in the clouds of all your thoughts! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: compilation
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 12:30:26 AM AEST
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| Great write. I think you have a great writing style. |
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