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my souls water fountain
Contributed by
taintedmind
on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:26:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Cut me, to make me bleed
the water of my soul
pours out onto the ground
before me
i go deeper
hurts, doesnt it?
-no feels good, wouldnt you do it?
i cant, or wont, stop myself
the red tears of eternity
condescending on the air of time
the light reflects off my face
i look up to you for forgiveness
you cast me away
everyone wants to cut
cut through my emotions
cut through me
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taintedmind
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2004-05-20 11:26:24]
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Re: my souls water fountain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:40:07 PM AEST
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well when they want to cut you'll want to have sticky glue... :op cute write, i like it... ;0)
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Re: my souls water fountain
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:45:31 AM AEST
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Great write... It was well written..
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