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Cut on the Dotted Line
Contributed by
paper-heart-hero
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:53:04 AM in AEST
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Im sorry were the words
That slipped from her lips
As her wrist dripped, from her fingertips
And I said its ok
Cuz I know that one day
Ill take you away from this
And with every drop that hit the sink
The walls of my heart would start to shrink
And she looked at me as if she were dead
And through crying eyes she slowly said
How can we dance on broken glass
How can we fly on broken wings
How can we love with broken hearts
How can we feel anything
Dont apologize
Just wipe your eyes
I understand that you feel at times
But I need you here
Dont disappear
Just hold my hand for one more year
And Ill show you
I love you
Im always thinking of you
Just stay, dont leave
Just stitch it up dont bleed
Cuz with red and silver dreams
We can make it to the end
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2004-05-20 11:53:04]
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Re: Cut on the Dotted Line
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:26:37 PM AEST
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excellent write! do you have a band? send me a pm or something.. love the song..
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Re: Cut on the Dotted Line
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by Remy on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:37:47 PM AEST
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wow... this is heavy, strong encouragement for those who desperately need it... awesome writing...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Cut on the Dotted Line
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by full_blur on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:18:23 PM AEST
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| this is very heavy, but I think it would make a beautiful and very moving song. The refrain is quite touching, I think it brings the whole piece together. |
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Re: Cut on the Dotted Line
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by painfullyme on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:22:52 PM AEST
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| i remember this one. it's gets better with every read. post more. i've missed reading your stuff |
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Re: Cut on the Dotted Line
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:41:57 PM AEST
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James, OMG! This is like the best one of yours I have EVER EVER read. This is so beautiful. Wow. I love it James. Thats great. I didnt realize until just now how much I missed your poetry and this site. Thank you.
Lindsey |
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