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as he walked away
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:47:02 PM in AEST
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It's gonna be ok
he said
as he walked away
you'll go on and live your life
you'll live it well
and achieve your dreams
forget me soon
and love again
he said as he walked away
he had his fun
and now he's done
i'm left alone to weep
it won't ever be ok
i said
as he walked away
I may go on and live my life
but my dream has come and gone
YOU will be ok
i said
as i shut the door.
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Re: as he walked away
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:17:30 PM AEST
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| A great write with simple honesty...Like it a lot...Russ |
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Re: as he walked away
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by fairy-of-ice on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:24:08 PM AEST
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| aww this is soo sad! simple yet very well expressed i can really understand how ur feeling..! well done |
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Re: as he walked away
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:32:14 PM AEST
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very well expressed and written:) hugs n' love nessa
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