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Dont act surprised
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:12:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I pass you and dont speak
dont act surprised
if we make eye contact and i turn away
dont act surprised
if I seem hollow or empty to you
dont act surprised
if i seem like im dead on the inside
dont act surprised
if i seem to avoid or ignore you
dont act surprised
if i dont want you around
dont act surprised......
beacuse you have taken your time to make it this way.
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2004-05-20 22:12:10]
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Re: Dont act surprised
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:39:17 PM AEST
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Hmmm... I can identify with this write... Loved it...
Jenni |
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Re: Dont act surprised
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by fairy-of-ice on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:30:55 PM AEST
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| i can relate to this too...wow! i loved this poem especially the last line! great poem well done! |
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Re: Dont act surprised
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:20:38 PM AEST
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| i love your writing. this one is no different. well written and i can understand where you are coming from. good job. |
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Re: Dont act surprised
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:35:14 AM AEST
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I can relate as always but this one strikes me...I loved it....great write keep it up...
much love,
Dani
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