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Rejection
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:27:23 PM in AEST
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Rejected
The pain is too much to bear
I just want to give up
And leave it there
To free myself from my pain
I can't even manage that
I can't give up my past
For an unknown future
My mind won't step foreward
My heart won't forget
My body won't realize
It's unwanted by my past
And longed for by my future
It just can't come to terms
That it's being rejected
Rejection is the fatal occurrence
Of the situation
It just ends the beginning
Nothing can stop the inevitability
Of the force of epiphany
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essentially9
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2004-05-20 22:27:23]
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Re: Rejection
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by pixie on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 06:19:51 AM AEST
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Great poem, rejection is a fear that we all carry around. you have expressed the pain in this very well.
pixie xx |
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Re: Rejection
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by afterdark on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:33:40 PM AEST
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| Perfect..I really felt this so much.Your wors alwasy go right inside of me.. |
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